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Red Tailed Hawk (done) by Temporaryfish

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The image is a little fuzzy. I would consider a black outline and/or adding more contrast to the colors in your image. The porportions, colors, and movement of the hawk are very good though. The shadows are pretty good, I would consider making the beak and talons more shiny by adding the blacks and whites sharper and more bold. Adding a background would also help bolden the image and make it more realistic. Your coloring is pretty spot on. The eyes are very expressive and would stand out make by darkening the area around the eyes. I hope my critique helped :) Your natural skills are very good and with a little practice you can get even better.
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Temporaryfish Feb 1, 2013  Student Filmographer
I agree thank you my next birds would look better with this help
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katrina3145 Feb 2, 2013  Student Interface Designer
no problem :)
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